The Crossing
Tobias found the page written in kaleh’k inside the lantern register. Varek’s seal appeared on it twice.
He had to meet Ysée after closing before curfew, before the gates of Roumat closed.
Review a book without scattering the decisions
Invite the right person, give them the right role and turn feedback into decisions without multiplying tools. Only the project owner needs Studio; every guest can participate with a Free or Author account.
Invite people with the right permissions
Each person receives a role suited to their contribution. The owner remains in control of permissions and invitations.
- Beta reader to read and comment
- Editor to suggest without imposing changes
- Translator to translate a scene from its source version
- Co-author to write in the manuscript
Comments and suggestions
A comment opens a discussion. A suggestion shows exactly which text would be replaced, then the author accepts or rejects it.
- Comments for discussing the passage
- Suggestions for proposing wording
- The author keeps the final decision
Comments2 open discussions
2
SR
Sol2 minutes ago
Is Varek’s hostility clear enough before this scene?
MV
MaraJust now
I’ll streamline the previous sentence.
CL
Claire4 minutes ago
The rhythm works better if this information stands alone.
Suggestions1 suggestion to review
1
CL
ClaireJust now
Originalmore recent
Suggestedtraced the previous day
See who is working on the project
Presence shows which scene or area each person has open. You can follow a collaborator directly without forcing everyone into a permanently shared view.
- See all three collaborators’ activity in one view
- Presence here, elsewhere or inactive
- Follow an active collaborator directly
Build the world together
On the canvas, collaborators see current selections and movements. Everyone can enrich characters, places and their connections without losing sight of the manuscript.
- Pointers and selections visible on the same canvas
- Protected movement while someone is editing
- Jump directly to the collaborator you want to join
Invite the right people at the right time
Start alone, then open your project to readers, editors or co-authors. Only you need Studio; your guests keep their Free or Author account.
Try the shared studio
This is clearer if the page is introduced in the previous chapter.
after closingSuggestedbefore curfewThe scene gains tension if Tobias hesitates before giving the page to Ysée.